i'll be here

• Artist: Temper-Mental247
• Description: agen as like all the others IN PROGRESS! plz point spelling errors that i missed and give me some ideas for other poem or song
• Date: 07/15/2009
• Tags: here

take my hand hold it tight
take my heart
have it hold it break it
as long as you no i love you
then i'll let you go
but you have to no
i'll be here when you need
to talk to cry or some one
to love i'll be here for
you

Comments

[Red Dragon Knight 2010]

its good! now just finish it! as for spelling, 6th line - "no" should be "know" and 8th line - "some one" should be "someone". i also suggest commas and more the "for" to the last line to say "for you". better flow