Key To My Heart

• Artist: Marissa Night
• Description: Again, like my others. All emo stuff.
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: heart

He is like the bright warm sun,
Always shining for me.
He is like the darkness night,
That's all he will ever be.

He is as gentle,
As a fresh flower petal.
He is a guard,
Surrounded by metal.

he is like a chest,
Hiding away his heart.
He is like a book,
Always in a different part.

He is like a god,
Protecting what is dear.
He is like a fire,
Always ready to sear.

He is like a cloud,
Always floating by.
He is like a villain,
Truly, able to lie.

He is like a mom,
His concern touches everyone truly.
He is like a kid,
Always acting so cruelly.

Jen

Comments

[Marissa Night]

Thanks.
Lolz. It was about my Ex boyfriend, actually.

[Jeyrin]

I wonder if you were thinking about the same person when you wrote it that I was thinking about when I read it? It's very good, and I like your rhyming pattern. Here on gaia, people tend to take the "poems don't have to rhyme" rule to the extreme. While they can still be nice without rhyming, it's hard to make them flow. 5/5 rate back?