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Everytime you see me ,
My heart beating so fast...
Everytime you talk to me ,
My heart pounding so fast...
Why ? Why ? Why ?
Everybody say it's love...
But I say it's not...
So what is it ? what is it ?
Everytime you are with her ,
I tell it's hurt...
But everytime you are with me ,
I feel happy...
I think I'm egoist...
I think I'm selfish...
But everybody say It's normal...
Cuz you are in love...
Am I ? Am I ?
I think yes...
You are the one ,
who can make me laugh...
It's all about you...
Love , love , love...
It's come from hate...
I hate you but I love you...
- by dEviL_vEnGeAnCe |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/25/2009 |
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- Title: b4 I hate u , Now I luv u
- Artist: dEviL_vEnGeAnCe
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- Date: 06/25/2009
- Tags: love hate
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Comments (4 Comments)
- dEviL_vEnGeAnCe - 08/26/2009
- thankyou sooo much biggrin
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 08/25/2009
- i thought the rythm was too fast but i still liked it i agree with you that it could be revised but i still really do like it write more please its good 4/5
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- dEviL_vEnGeAnCe - 08/19/2009
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yes... smile
thank you for ur advicee smile
i'll try to revise it ! biggrin
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- Jeyrin - 06/27/2009
- We all can understand that >.< But the words could flow a bit better. 4/5. Rate back?
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