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Shiny and clean,
As it sits there mocking you.
Trying to pretend it isn't seen,
Is something that's hard to do.
"Just wait," says a voice,
"You'll do it, just watch."
Is it really your choice,
Whether you do it or not?
These thoughts swirl around your mind,
And if feels like the sky is falling.
It's created suck a strong bind,
Should you even be trying?
Why push the limits,
And chance the only way you have to cope?
You let out a stream of "Dammits,"
Is there any antidote?
- by Emilie_Aututmn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: Antidote
- Artist: Emilie_Aututmn
- Description: Yeah. It's a poem. It's mine. It's copyrighted. Just like my others. It sucks, I know. Comment please.
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: antidote
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Mimi-chan Uchiha - 08/08/2009
- hehehe, a lot of poetry goes over my head. I get some basic meaning, but I'm not that good at deciphering poetry. I can feel the meaning and emotion behind it, though. Great job! 4/5
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- AngelicJaneForever - 06/30/2009
- It doesn't suck. Good job. biggrin
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