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Sometimes I feel like my
heart ran away from me when i was a little girl,
That I can no longer think for myself
nor feel any emotion at all,
Doing what other people tell me to do,
Living because other people tell me to,
But when that certain someone comes along
who deep down i feel pasonate about
even though i know im just going to be denied,
But he cant break my heart,
He cant break it because it isn't there,
Its in The Darkness,
Surrounded by all the other boys and girls hearts
who have died from this horrible thing called "LOVE"
- by pancakes333 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: my silent heartbeat
- Artist: pancakes333
- Description: i was getting over a guy.....
- Date: 06/22/2009
- Tags: silent heartbeay
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Chamomile Dream - 05/09/2010
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'Feel passionate' doesn't really work. The correct term in this context would have been 'passionately', although I respect this may not have fit the structure of the poem.
Other than that, this is a beautiful poem. Well done.
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