apostrophy to the ocean...

• Artist: pikiio
• Description: it is about what man is doing to this world...
• Date: 06/09/2009
• Tags: apostrophy ocean

There is a pleasure in the pathless woods
There is a rapture on the lonely shore
There is society where none intrudes
where the deep sea and ocean roar
I love not man the less, but nature more
for man marks the earth in ruin

roll on thou deep dark ocean, roll!
mans hatred for himself shall stop
for if not..he shall sink to the botom of the sea
there let him lay!!!

Comments

[Rumplestyltskin]

you know you could add at the bottom "there let him lay, and forever shall he stay!"
other than that in put I love this 5/5 ^.^

[Silencematters]

wow i love all of it it was very well written and your very talented check out my new ones plz lol again very well done 5/5

[pikiio]

I know my sister started blaring music into my ear near the middle I couldn't think! sad

[Penelope Difference]

I like the beginning, but not the end.
3/5!