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Broken Dreams, Fixed With A Broken Heart,
It’s Impossible To Reach Someone So Far Apart.
You Got Me Through Life, The Good And Bad,
Needless To Say, You Were All I Had.
Less Than A Lover, But More Than A Friend.
It’s Too Hard, To Believe It Had Too End.
I Can’t Just Call You, You Won’t Hear My Cries,
And You Can No Longer Help Me, With The Tears In My Eyes.
The Last Piece Of You Standing, Lies Around My Wrist,
When Things Get Hard, It’ll Be In My Fist.
I’ll Be Ringing That Bell, Hoping You’ll Hear,
Knowing You’ll Give Me Strength; To Survive Each Year.
It’s Too Easy To Forget, That You’re Gone,
It Hurts Me The Most When I’m Alone At Dawn.
The Darkness Shows Everything, I Can’t Just Hide Behind Light,
I Try to Breathe A Lie, But I’m Still Not Alright.
The Happy Memories Are Painful, But Every Now And Then,
I Sit And Think Of Them, And Re-Live Them Again.
Your Eyes Were Green, A Beautiful Emerald,
It’s Sad You Left So Soon, You Hadn’t Even Grown Old.
I Remember The Pain, I Feel Like I Caused,
And The Misery I Put You Through, When My Life Was Paused.
I Shouldn’t Have Been Hiding, I Should’ve Been With You,
Looking Back Now, It Would Have Been Easier To Get Through.
I Had All I’d Need, But Was Too Selfish To See It,
I Kept Wanting More, Without Realizing What You Needed.
All You Wanted, Was To Not Be Ignored,
But I Was To Stupid, To See That Before.
I Should Have Loved You More, While I Had The Chance,
Or At Least Made It More Obvious, Then What You’d See At First Glance.
I’m Sorry The Last Thing You Saw Was Me Screaming, But I Didn’t Know What To Do,
I Should Have Been Smarter, And Sat Down Beside You.
I’m Sorry For All The Mistakes, That I’ve Made,
If I Could Do One Thing, I’d Take Them Away.
I’d Re-Live The Moments, I Had With You,
And Make Up For All The s**t You Had To Go Through.
I’m Sorry I Expected You, To Help With All That Was Wrong,
But Trying Or Not, You Were Helping All Along.
You’ll Never Be Forgotten; You’re Always On My Mind,
The Memories Of You, Are Why Tears Make Me Blind.
They’re Tears Of Pain, ‘Cause The Memories Were Happy,
But Through It All I’ll Remember, You’re My Little Baby.<3
- by Silver Poison |
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- | Submitted on 06/08/2009 |
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- Title: Dee-Eye-Zee-Zee-Why<3
- Artist: Silver Poison
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This is a poem thingy I wrote in February.
It's about my cat who passed away February 14th 2009.
I miss her a lot, but this was written while her loss was still fresh in my mind. I think it was the day after or something like that.
I know it's nothing amazing, but I do like it.
Though a lot of it is pretty choppy, I don't think it's bad.
Tell me what you think.
I like to hear CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
Thank you! :D - Date: 06/08/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Missunderstood soul - 07/18/2009
- that was an amazing poem, it reminds me of my old dog, her name was Elly she didn't die but my mom met this gut and her said she bit him when she really didn't so we got rid of her, i cried for three weeks straight and wouldn't even talk to my mom, this made me cry over her again, those are the same feeling's that i had when she left
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- Kanashii Komoriuta - 06/16/2009
- That is an awsome poem! im soo sorry about ur cat, she looks very pretty. The poem made meh get tears on my eyes... i luv it! the poem made meh feel sad, but happy at the same time.... im wierd... well lovely poem! i wish i could put 10/10.. cuz thats what this poem deserves! 5/5!
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- I lurv pi - 06/10/2009
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That is amazing! one thing about poetry is how you can make something so beautiful out of something you feel... ♥
and I can tell you were very passionate about your cat, I am too, so dont feel bad...
and it made me tear up too♥ - Report As Spam
- joyless deception - 06/08/2009
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That honestly made me tear up a bit.. I miss her too TnT
It is a bit choppy, as you said, but not bad at all. I know that I'm biased, but you got your feelings across to me. - Report As Spam