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Easy to leave but so hard to stay.
every day is not a day.
we fall when we leap and reach for the stars
but yet no one knows who we are.
i feel as though my heart has left.
my heart as bent as it can be bent. but we are lost from.
from the exsitence of the world.
and we fall into the arms of hurt.
we get lost along the way.
we are far far away.
from the place we call home.
far from knowing the only one we can know.
that is us.
we lose ourselves.
we all are gone.
- by Arian rosewater |
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- | Submitted on 06/05/2009 |
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- Title: We are.
- Artist: Arian rosewater
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- Date: 06/05/2009
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- rocko11091 - 06/07/2009
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interesting poem.like the idea,but in terms of poetics,found it slightly lacking.the style/form of the poem was not all that easy to read, from the perspective of a poem.in terms of imagery/ figurative language, i found few poetic devices that really reeled me in.flow of the poem was very choppy, which also affected the reading of it.
Concept:4/5
Style:3/5
Flow:1/5
Fig. Lang./Imagery:1/5
Overall:2.25/5 - Report As Spam