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I wrote a couple poems around a week ago on one of those days where I do nothing but ponder and contemplate. I know it seems quite short, but this is one of the most meaningful poems I've written in years. For this particular poem, I express a couple personal feelings that have been on my mind, but I also wanted to implement mystery and make it as subjective as possible. For the sake of the poem's original purpose, I won't say what I wrote about, but instead I'll let your own thoughts and feelings interpret as they may. I'd really like to hear how this is being interpreted and hope that some of you will comment with your personal thoughts on its meaning or message me on the matter. Thank you for your thoughts.
~Aryeec
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There are things I'd love to say,
for not love's sake,
but petty conversation;
From the truth we'd go astray,
as if the heart were not awake.
The truth? Love is my inspiration.
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- Title: "N/A"
- Artist: Aryeec
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- Date: 06/01/2009
- Tags: love truth heart inspiration
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- Chastity Flanderz - 06/05/2009
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Got to say it is amazing!
It is so true nd it captures life so well. - Report As Spam
- animalgoddess22 - 06/02/2009
- I'm not one who really gets poetry or acually likes it alot but this poem is nice. I think i like it so much for it is kind of simple but means a lot. Its really nice, keep up the good work
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- Insanitys Playmate - 06/02/2009
- Hm. I like it. Some of the poem doesn't quite flow, but I really like this poem. The last line is what got me. Amazing work. I am faving this.
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