foes

• Artist: bregangstaaa
• Description: something i wrote on personal experiences.
  this only took me 2 minutes so its not great.
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: foes

i wrote this when i had nothing better to do...

who of you are my foes?
you attack me during night, when the moon is up and your out of sight
you take the advantage of my kindness, you steal from my heart
yet again
every time you break me
til im on my knee's
begging please
but it isnt i that should be begging
forever you have wounded me
my trust now must be earned
ive slain all our cords
but forgive you?
yes i do

Comments

[Pixe stars]

this should be put in a samuria anime.

[weeaboo extreme]

i agree -pushes the nuke button making her have 1/5-

[Insanitys Playmate]

Um...it's not bad. But if you thought it wasn't "great," why post it? If you enter a battle expecting that you will die, you will. It's a mindset, sweetie. You probably should only post things that you worked hard on. If you didn't try, it's not worth anyone's time.