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Count two three a Nightmare
A nightmare percisly a hostile dream.
"awaken yourself" surrounded. skattered with dolls
one is which could speak. Her eyes a gleam
you gather a breath as your chased to stalls.
"One two three" As you count in your mind
A dead still silence. and here comes a grin.
the third stall down was filled with a mime
begining to laugh With a white pointed chin.
The floor turns pitch black as you start to race.
Wounds left unclean, one child cries
you know its a trap but still at same pace
"I cant die in love" just tell yourself lies.
asking brutally to her "cant you see Im in pain"
A beautiful nurse stands with a smile
stabbed more than once upon all your vains
She giggles ubundantly for more than the while
And the crying gets closer but again comes a nurse.
emboarderd in gray, a long over worn skirt
you are shoved in a coffin, loaded onto the hearse
Filled with two people the size a bit curt.
"anxiety" begins to Flood a blank mind
Death sneaks upon, close, shutting your eyes
The sun caresses your body quite kind
As there's suffer, rope burn, two hands were once tied.
See the young girl beside you
Her body still as clay
"Be kind and sweet to me"
"I may be your nurse someday"
- by KitiieoxoCookiie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/27/2009 |
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- Title: Count yourself a Nightmare
- Artist: KitiieoxoCookiie
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Description:
Erm. Okie Love is just an amazing thing
to write about but it shouldnt be all we
write about. Love is a great feeling and
that consists of most of my poetry so I tried
something new. and then after I get meh ratings
I will write another love poem <//3
-Enjoy. please COMMENT!! - Date: 05/27/2009
- Tags: nightmare
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Arkelle - 05/28/2009
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Very well written. Great symbolism and personification.
I loved this because I had to read it a few times to fully grasp is majesty. I love poems that do that! ^^
You should definately write more! 5/5 - Report As Spam