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I’m falling apart
In pieces I lay
Crying, alone and hurt
With nothing to say
I will wait for you
In my motionless state
Memories crowd inside my head, of everything you said
With heartless notions
You lead me on
The pain is now worse
Growing like a flower ready to bloom
But then no longer we drift apart
I still want to hold on,
But instead comes the tears
The flower is decinagrating
I hate it
The pain is worse than death
Tears wont stop emerging
Becoming a lake beneath me
I was left alone
Screaming wont do anything
- Title: Screaming wont help
- Artist: Neau Shii
- Description: ummm, first entry. It probably sucks, but oh well...
- Date: 05/16/2009
- Tags: screaming wont help alone depressing
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Haiizel Nut - 05/18/2009
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No it doesnt suck. small amount of improvement is
needed. but otherwise its really great (check out
my stuff if youd like?) It may be no better than yours
which is good <//3 - Report As Spam