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The rain beats down against the cement,
A lulling sound tha6t upsets my breath.
Hushing noises defining in the silence,
My heart stirs and the feeling of home arises again.
With the first drop comes thousands,
Faster and faster till the down-pour hits.
Like a hidden force or a long lost friend,
My feet take steps to my safe haven.
Silence too loud as,
The rain pelts my skin,
Feeling warm again.
Thunder sounds in the distance,
Rumbles fill every molecule of my body,
As the lightning has a war with the dark.
This whole process bringing me closer to what goes on in my heart.
Glimpses of light trying to fight of the night.
Washing waves try to cleanse the ever dirtying,
The low rumble a distant voice trying to grasp at the sinking.
That war inside me,
Making me want to scream out loud,
Hushes me instantly.
Like this phenomenon,
No one truly knows who I am,
Take the time and it would be so proclaiming.
As the storm wears on,
I am relaxed again,
No worries to constantly hear about,
No one thinking they know,
Just peace as it wears on.
- by Chastity Flanderz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/09/2009 |
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- Title: Rain
- Artist: Chastity Flanderz
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Description:
It's sorta how I feel about rain,
and well what it does to me..
It's like my little miricle. - Date: 05/09/2009
- Tags: rain feelings lightning storm
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Aryeec - 06/03/2009
- no matter the storm. Amazing job at expressing feeling! 5/5 fav
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- Aryeec - 06/03/2009
- I think it'd work very well splitting up the fifth stanza into two so you could be even more descriptive (I love lots of imagery). It kind of sounds/feels like you had to squeeze in almost too much than it can handle into that section, but at the same time something about this strikes me as comfortable and fitting. Kinda contradicts, but oh well. I really really like this one. Rain is always calming, no matter the st
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