- I only held You for a little while but then You went to heaven and all remember u forever...
- by XDIm _A_DorkXD |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
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- Title: forever
- Artist: XDIm _A_DorkXD
- Description: the words say it all.. cannot be described
- Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: forever
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- XDIm _A_DorkXD - 05/09/2009
- it matter not how long a poem is but the feeling behind it.. think about a person u have just met and u love this person even though u have just met them then they die do u forget that person or do u remember them for ever... really how short it is doesn't mean s**t the words mean alot
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- Annastaysia - 05/07/2009
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if it cannot be described don't try writing a poem about it, unless you're describing how it can't be described or something. waay too simple...
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- unknown philosophy - 05/06/2009
- a bit simple, but nice. the 'u' at the end through me off. 3
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