Try

• Artist: Unisexy
• Description: A strange poem I wrote quite a while ago. Tell me what you think ^^
• Date: 04/28/2009
• Tags: hopetry

Is there anyone who can tell me
Who can tell me why
I’m going to find out
I at least have to try

Is there anyone who can see me
Who can tell me why
I must keep on going
I should stay and try

Is there anyone who can hear me
Who can tell me why
I’m starting to lose my hope
But still I must try

Is there anyone still here
Anyone who can
I guess they all went home
Tomorow I’ll try again
goodbye

Comments

[Tomomi Tsubaki]

really nice! 5/5

[Caesura Caelum]

I think this is a great poem, i really liked it a lot. 5/5

[X-ButterFly-Effects-X]

try and try and try.. xd