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The hands on a clock
The hands come alive
Only fast-forward
No rewind
Hour by hour
Like a story that never ends
People make mistakes with family or friends
People open their hearts while the clock keeps ticking
No holding back, the hands aren't sticking
While it keeps going people don't learn
Time won't stop, the hands still turn...
- by Sweetsinger676 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/15/2009 |
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- Title: Time
- Artist: Sweetsinger676
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- Date: 04/15/2009
- Tags: time
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 04/18/2009
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I agree with the person below me. You should keep writing. 3/5.
Also, the *no holding back... was redundant and it seemed as if you tried too hard to force another rhyme.
That's what I thought. - Report As Spam
- Silver Pearl Moon - 04/15/2009
- awesome and plzzzz keep writing 5/5
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