A Sonnet: My Lover, My Night

• Artist: XoStrawberry_ToxicXo
• Description: I was asked to write a sonnet for my high school english class and I came up with this. But I didn't hand it in because it was way too good. So I've decided to share it with my fellow Gaians instead! Most of my family and friends think I'm super talented but I'm not so sure if I can see the brilliance as well. Tell me what you think and rate my poem. Thank you :3
  
  ~Seraphim
  
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: sonnet lover night

In the garden, your advent I await

For night’s blanket to pull across the sky

United once again, this wondrous fate

Though light-years apart, I feel so close by

Celestial lover we meet once more

Hours without you, an eternity

By day I long for you, my heart is sore

In this, our love, there’s no uncertainty

My hands reach out, as if we are to touch

Wishing this brief moment of night could last

I offer you my heart, though it’s not much

I am who I am, no matter my past

Love runneth over to those down below

May it bring peace, this love we bestow

Comments

[xYour-Ultimate-Fancyx]

Lovely job, I absoulutelt love it <3