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The beauty you are
My wonderful goddess
But you have that discriminating scar
Isn't that the oddest?
They think you're bad because you have thorns
They think you're evil by your darkness
But can't they see you're short of the devil's horns
They're probably just jealous of your beauty my goddess
But your darkness makes me feel aloft
With your smell under my nose
Your petals oh so soft
My beautiful black rose
- Title: Black Rose
- Artist: Zira361
- Description: This is a poem about a black rose, hence the title. This was made in five minutes. Most of my friends thought I didn't write this because I'm usually very silly. They saw it and told me, "How can you write this, you're retarded?!" Anyways, I hope you like it. ^^
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: black rose
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Comments (7 Comments)
- saiyan2k1 - 04/25/2009
- absolutely speechless. :]
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- the silver belladonna - 04/20/2009
- This is amazing, I wish my stuff was this good 10000000000000000000.../5
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- SeeingGuardianWolf - 04/19/2009
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it beautiful
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- DeerestHammy - 04/15/2009
- I love it Zira-chan!!! 10/5! *hugs zira*
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- Ubiquitous Androgyny - 04/14/2009
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i likes it x3
like really good xD
but it coulda used one more verse, i like read it and im like
"oh it over T~T"
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- Zira361 - 04/12/2009
- Thank you, and you can bet that I will. ^^
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- Jarmis - 04/11/2009
- Good descriptions. Not incredibly amazing or anything, but I'll bet you could be. Just keep on writing.
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