HELP ME!!! READ DESCRIPTION!!

• Artist: CrazyRach2013
• Description: Ok so...i dont think its good..well i do n i dont..it has its ups n downs.
  NEWAYS!! lets get the point. as u can c its not done. im like...hmm writers block if u wanna call it tht?? im stuck.i need like a nxt line or a few.
  
  Comment & help me. i would luv u!!! XP u can say bad sh!t about it like :ITS SUX!! or anyother crap.i really dont care.
  all i need is to get it done. with ur help tht will happen ^^
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: help read description

She lies next to the cold wall
She curls up into a small ball

Blood drains down her pale arm
Her mind is filled with so much alarm

The stained knife drops to the floor
Her body can take nomore

Comments

[twilightRocks09]

it needs lines like=
she is draind of all life
her body in a cold misareble shell
her eyes r blank
no flicker of life in them
only blank like a sheet of paper
untitled
unwritten
and she goes to the shreader and comes out into peaces

[mermaidgrl224]

well if you are in a writers block you should go some were were the place inspires you my place is a rose garden or up in my part of the fort my granparents built ages ago, that is were I go For the title you could put "No More" if you need any help with ur poem after this contact me, or my poem darkness it relates to some thing close to this if you want to check it out. smile

[CrazyRach2013]

Omg i forgot to add i need a title for the poem too. razz