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All of these people all these faces fading from my mind I fall into the darkness of nothing all the while I cry for help I shout I yell I scream some one pull me out some one help me but no one is there no one is there to pull you up into the light. Darkness. No one to save you. You are on your own. Help me. bring me into light.
SAVE ME.
- by mermaidgrl224 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/11/2009 |
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- Title: Darkness
- Artist: mermaidgrl224
- Description: this is how I personaly feel
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ranroar - 02/06/2010
- beautiful. . .but please be happy!! life is supposed to be fun!
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- RhageisMyGame - 07/05/2009
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Not to sound totally unnatural here.
But theres nothing wrong with darkness.
Sometimes the light hurts us just as much if not more than the darkness. Life is confusing, you just have to find your own way to deal with it without hurting others. But, it is a beautiful poem. You deffinently have talent, may be a little rough, but a little more practice and you'll be good. - Report As Spam
- hikari megumi 15 - 04/17/2009
- hm... sounds uncanny. o.o
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- Fierce_Tigress - 04/11/2009
- oh hun that really good! i just hope your in the light and not the darkness but if so i'll save you
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- MrParaduo - 04/11/2009
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Sad, it feels very sad. Hope your seriously not feeling this way. sad
But if your focus was to make a tragic poem, then five stars! - Report As Spam
- mermaidgrl224 - 04/11/2009
- If you think it needs some thing then pleez tell me but leave the bad critisism behind!
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