Forgive Me

• Artist: yayaHoodlum
• Description: Just a little poem.
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• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: forgive

I will absolutely burn the bridge of our fate.
I will snip at the wires until the wires snap,
and our bridge descends down
down
down
into the depths,

Bringing with it the minivans of our memories.

I will absolutely burn our bridge.
If only you promise to rebuild it.

Comments

[The Berry Lipstick]

I agree with the person under me. I laughed at the minivan part, and, well I really enjoyed it. =D Keep it up.

[SirynECrow]

Surprisingly I like it quite a bit. I couldn't help but giggle at "the minivans of our memories" vivid and...entertaining, but not in the usual way. Very good.