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A whispered breath and cool night air
All blows through long night hair
Eyes shine and dazzle and gleam
Ocean orbs in a dream
The color of the moon on smooth silk
Soft and sweet like cream or milk
Small and thin, full and strong
Not caring what is right or wrong
A desert storm at the ocean side
Following as white sails guide
Twist and turn and jump and spin
Long and almost see-through thin
An under-water-mermaid song
Dancing like a graceful fawn
Bells do chime and others ring
Loud and sweet and joyful things
Watery hands clutch and crash
Light night twirls away from the lash
Pale bells follow and but quickly fall back
As begging and tearful hands try to slap
The winds roar and scream, displeased
That this maid be free, untamed, unseized
It swirls and it tears and it pulls at her hair
It makes rose cheeks all the more fair
But finally it pulls and it tugs hard enough
And she falls on the floor that is course and rough
Another hand crashes, another breeze screams
It tears once again and pulls a sash from its seams
The ghostly cloth flutters into hands that clasp
And the wind begins to chuckle and laugh
The night haired maiden laughs with it too
Not knowing what the elements wish to do
She dances and twirls into a caressing touch
But as she moves closer it becomes a clutch
The mermaid screams and tears and begs to be free
But the wind and the water will not let her be
They fill her mouth and lay her down
She shrills, but there comes no sound
The water takes all that he can
Then gently lays her in the sand
Her silk, so whiter holds soft and still
In a pale made only for an earthen till
The warmth has gone and the bright is black
The song is gone, never to come back
Screaming rape by the sea
Taking life, untamed and free
- Title: Raping Sea
- Artist: Hallow16
- Description: WARNING! This poem contains material which you may or may not be sinsitive to. However, this is something that comes from the heart. You may take the content in one way or another. It's up to you really if it's about rape or drowning. You chose...
- Date: 04/04/2009
- Tags: rape drowning death
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 08/06/2009
- This really touches personal experiences, I think it had both rape and drowning. I totally get it. The part where "irishduckyqueen" said about it being confusing, well she trusted the guy at that moment but then he violated her...i get it.. *cries*
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- Zombie Kebab - 07/09/2009
- it was good but i got a little confused here and there because it seemed like she was enjoying being with the guy and him touching her but then he was raping her and then i was like, she totally drowned it was rape. This poem is such a mind tease, keep it up. x]
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- meizha - 04/04/2009
- I'm not really in the reading mood right now. But I just kinda read it once and I'm not so sure about it. I still have to read it thoroughly to check the inconsistencies I seem to have noticed. I'll just give a rating by then.
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