Lonely

• Artist: x_Sweet K o k o r o
• Description: Erm ... do not tell meht that i spelled this wrong or that wrong >.> im bad at spelling >.>
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: lonely

If I stood here
would it make a difference
If I stood there
with a group of
people who I Don't know
Its lonely in my world
I see things
Differently
I see Fear and
Dreams
I feel lonely
I see all this in
the world
all the things that
make you
Feel Lonely
Feel Fear

Comments

[x_Sweet K o k o r o]

Lol Im not good at grammar too >;O and so yur telling meh that this poem suks .. i dont care this is how i write if i want to write like this i like it >;O

[fIexed]

No spelling issues, but definitely grammar issues.
The poem asserts a lot, and then the last two lines refute everything without any sort of buffer, trick, or idea. Lacks punch.