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Do we really need someone
To hold up our head?
Do we really need words
To describe our heart's dead?
You loved me 'cause i had a heart of stone
But at my first tear you left me all alone.
I don't think it's fair
I don't think it's easy
To breathe this air anymore.
Do we really need someone by our side
Even if without we can survive?
Do we need to cry
While we're waiting for those lies?
- by xXDeadly_Punk_princessXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/22/2009 |
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- Title: Lost souls
- Artist: xXDeadly_Punk_princessXx
- Description: It was for someone I really cared about,it's kinda sad and whatever ... but now It's one of my cutest poetry I ever made ^-^ so I'll put it here.Critics are REALLY apreciated. =D
- Date: 03/22/2009
- Tags: lost souls poerty song love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Ikanyx - 04/11/2009
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It's so calming and cute ...you need some practice tho ':
because it's your first i'm gonna give it a 5/5
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- Free_to_Dream - 03/27/2009
- Sorry, no criticism, but I love your poem. 5/5 *slow building appluase*
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