What once Was War

• Artist: Mr Erx
• Description: I just felt like righting a haiku
• Date: 03/20/2009
• Tags: haiku what poem

Once there was glory
When one fought in a battle
Now there is just gore

They fought for their rights
There used to be a purpose
Now it is just war

The men were fearless
They fought together with sword
Now that was a war

Comments

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um i see what your trying to say but you need to look at it in more angles than one. kkthx. poem cnstruction is great.