a friend

• Artist: pop_it_like_its_hot1226
• Description: This poem describes a friend. We were really good friends but now he's moved away. Some of the lines in the poem may not make sense unless you know the perosn or know what im tlaking about. Ex- You've over come many obstacles, this line represents him overcoming cancer. and the line: when the summer finally ended, on to the end, it talks about me wanting him to come back to florida and watch me in my plays. Hint the line: and watch me from a distace.
  I hope you like it
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: friend

For when I first saw you
I was oblivious of what i saw
Just a normal kid,
Who looked like everyone with flaws
But when I look closer
And peer into your eyes
I see the pain and stuggle through your families lives
You've over come many obstacles
And for that I adore you
My feelings still going strong
I could be myself around you
I would not be criticized
And I loved to be around you
And see life through your eyes
When the summer finaly ended
And we went our seperate ways
I was sure to see you
In other later days
For now you've moved away
My heart still tourn from sadness
I hope to keep in touch
And hear your silly madness
I hope you visit soon
And come watch me from a distance
But until then
I'll be my only witness

Comments

[Rushed xx]

i think its good! :3 its really touching and nice length
5/5

[pop_it_like_its_hot1226]

people please comment. i need feedback so i can make my peoms better.