Love

• Artist: keybladerboyriku
• Description: this is just random thoughts about love.
• Date: 03/08/2009
• Tags: love

What is love?
Is it really everlasting
Or is it just an illusion?
They say eveyone has their own "soulmate"
But what determines if the person is Mr./Mrs. Right?
Some want someone who has a pretty face,
But they find out that Mr./Mrs. Right was in it to use them.
Some want a beatiful mind,
But they find out to that person's mind they're meaningless.
Will a ray of hope shine upon these souls
Or will they have to survive with their decision.
There are the souls that others don't pay them any attention
Will there be a "soulmate" for me
Or will I have to to remain in soulitude.

Comments

[Harper Faye]

My opinion is that it's really good. It's a super good topic and a wonderful idea. Just two things that you may agree or disagree with me about is that when there is mr/mrs it sort of disrupts the flow. So maybe just choose one gender. And the second is when you put quotations around a word you make it look like your just using a word that others have used before you, so it seems to hold less meaning. Otherwise I think it's fantastic and will rate it 5/5