Broken Pieces

• Artist: Shadow_Fox1392
• Description: This is from when I first started writing. Well, a little after I had first started. It's really bad, tho. I just thought I would see what other people think about it. I can usaully only write when I'm depressed. That's the emotion I almost always feel the strongest. I can only write when feeling extreme emotion. And My boyfriend was... Well, he was a crap boyfriend. I wrote this because of him.
• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: broken pieces

Alone, away from civilization
Yet, here I stand
What a stange sensation
I'm like a one man band
But without the instruments
My heart beats slowly
My mind is Hell bent
Sending me into a spiraling fall
Everyone is watching
But I don't care
I barely hear your call
Trying to bring me back
I don't care
I won't turn around
I will no longer answer your cries
My love was found
And taken advantage of
Now, as it dies
You say you're sorry
But I know you're not
Don't worry
My trust is caught
In the broken pieces of my heart
Sealed away in a box
I knew from the start
Not to trust my thoughts
But I did
And my mind pays
With the broken peices of my heart
And there are days
When I can't go on
But I try anyways
Because in the end
You are the one that is alone
You hold some of my broken heart
And think about what you have done
Now that we are apart
You wonder aimlessly
Around your own mind
But I am somewhat happy
Because I finally left you behind
Along with the broken peices of my heart

Comments

[Dark Devia]

Wow. This is really good. And very lyrical, I agree. Reminds me of some of my stuff, actually. . . . . .

[Shadow_Fox1392]

No stealing. I'll hunt you down.

[XxTechno-TerrorxX]

omg i made up a tune to this and the words went really well together I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!