I Forgot...

• Artist: Fake Silence
• Description: This is dedicated to You-know-who-you-are, who means the world to me. We didn't do everything mentioned in the poem, but, it's just that i need him to know that, i feel the same way he does.
  *smile*
  p/s Please comment and rate my other submissions too =)
  
• Date: 03/03/2009
• Tags: forgot remember

I remember you.
I remember your smiles.
I remember the warmth to be in your arms.
I remember the letters you sent everyday.
I remember you goodnight kisses.
I remember the beating of your heart.
I remember your rhythmic breathing.
I remember the sweet smell of your hair.
I remember the gentle look in your eyes.
I remember the way you fed me chocolate.
I remember the piggybacks we had.
I remember the song we both liked so much.
I remember how your fingers fit perfectly into mine.
I remember how it hurt to see you cry.
I remember everything about you.
But,
I forgot to forget you.

Comments

[Tahi the Treacherous]

This one is fantastic! The little "play-on-words twist" at the end was a great touch. Well done!

[yinyangtwinsxss]

Okay, now this one has to be the best..

I think I'll save it if you don't mind. =P 5/5

[beanieXbee]

omigod i almost cried sad but it was such a good poem i loves it smile

[x not in use x]

i love it 5/5

[P00R L3N0]

love this. you write so brilliantly.
I'm not sure if its about a break up, or something else... makes me think break up. I like the repetition.

[Setsuna F Saiey]

wow..ur poem is awesome ..full of meaning, but i dont understand it means.i dont even know...anyway its cool.