Gone

• Artist: EmiPengy
• Description: it's about someone in my family, who means alot to me.
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: gone death

Gone
Simple as that
Nothing can ever get him back
As he lays in a hospital bed
We know his next breath
Could be his last

Gone
Snap your fingers
Count to three
Nothing will help
He's already gone
And life can't ever be the same

Now that he is almost

Gone

Comments

[EmiPengy]

ya know, "sad" was kind of the maun idea right?

[Super Sassy Chick]

i think its kinda sad sad

[Super Sassy Chick]

i think its kinda sad

[johndekool]

:'( these were my thoughts awhile back.

[290DarkStars]

I like it a lot! 5/5! but just a tip (that you dont hafta follow) I would have enjoyd it a bit more as art instead of a statement if you rhymed a little bit and put a lot more stanzas explaining everything that went through your spirit. Im not compareing myself to your loss! Im just trying to give you a piece of advice, just diddnt want any misunderstanding.
sweatdrop
but I still loved it, it describes your pain verry well, I can almost feel a taste of it you did it so good.

[funky crystal]

i know how you feel, my mum was in hospital with cancer and i couldn't do anything a few weeks later she died

[Frozen Corruption]

i know a poum by my friend named spicesayy that so goes along w/ this...just look up "For Long"...it is similer to this