Love........

• Artist: kingkiller008
• Description: just something i might try ok comment it on it and see if you like its about me in real life *not on here so if you are my girlfriend on gaia its not about you at all* i dont mind comments just rude ones bother me. Btw im not emo is just im usually sad or mad thats all
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: love sadness hapiness notcarefull

Love...., it is everywhere you go, even your best friend could be in love with someone or even you eek sometimes..., love is not something that makes you happy it could be the people who care about you or even "trust" It is what people whom they are what they would they be in life. Either good or bad we all have someone we could "trust" or "love" in life really. sometimes if you did miss the person that you knew or know now it could end up in some imaginary love story. But really it all could be false for all you know. Even one person in life who has ended up lonely could be in love but is afraid to admit it or whatever. "love......", is just something that can or can not be part of your life at all really stare .

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Comments

[AceOfTheHeart]

hey little miss seasoning over their. Poems are an expression of ones emotions or feelings it dosent need to be strong it just needs to be thoughtfull king did a decent job their is no reason for you to show anger or dissapointment

[kingkiller008]

dude like i said im am freakin new and soooo what i would love to actuallly to come to my house and say that to my face ok? take a chill and actually make like a funny comment seriously i even said im trying this out ok dont go like go crazy on me good lord man your so serious and you know being a teen is fun cause i actually have a life that i can live so yea why dont you go hump a tree or your mom ok

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

The work is weak and cliche. It flouts the rules of grammar and makes no actual statement on your topic, besides that which could be find in the the angst-ridden journals of all teens. Cut out the emoticons. If you want to be taken seriously, don't put up things like this.

[Andromeda Scarlet]

good job^^ its all true. 5/5