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Everywhere you go
there is cruel and bitter
darkness. it reaks its horrible
havock on these people, trying to
guide these people the wrong way.
There is darkness inside everyone's heart
that is what causes us to
do bad things. But
don't be afraid. As darkness
there is light as well.
This light comes to
fill every dark corner
with that light.
So as there is darkness in
everyone's heart,
light can to be found as well.
- by ii_xMidnight-Bluex_ii |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/06/2009 |
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- Title: Darkness and Light
- Artist: ii_xMidnight-Bluex_ii
- Description: So this is my first poem, and well it's about how where there is darkness in everyone's heart there is also light. (Was this poem any good?)
- Date: 02/06/2009
- Tags: darkness light
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- ii_xMidnight-Bluex_ii - 03/12/2009
- Wahoo! So many comments from me!
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- ii_xMidnight-Bluex_ii - 03/10/2009
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Yay. I fixed the error!
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- ii_xMidnight-Bluex_ii - 02/13/2009
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oops sometimes i do heh. srry bout dat
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- Sakura of the Undead - 02/10/2009
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it's aight but one grammatical error i see and that's
"it reaks its horribly havock on these people" the horibly should be horrible =) but good job none the less - Report As Spam
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