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You walk away and roll your eyes
But you do not think to realize
That this world is filled with hate
You can't escape it- it's your fate
Hold in your pain and your tears
Because no one cares for your fears
Rip your eyes out, turn them around
Watch your mouth fall to the ground
No matter what there's no escape
Not with all the murder and rape
People die every single day
Some die in a very painful way
So walk away and roll your eyes
But now you have to realize
That the words I speak are true
Life sucks because people like you
Think you're God, no one else matters
Dump others- laugh as their heart shatters
You walk around acting like you're God
But I saw you once at Cape Cod
In a dark lonely alley you were lying
And I noticed that you were crying
I helped you up off the ground
Turned your life all the way around
Then you changed- became too cool
So you played me just like a fool
So walk away and roll your eyes
But now I know that you realize
- by Creepy Gabriella |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/05/2009 |
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- Title: Realize
- Artist: Creepy Gabriella
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- Date: 02/05/2009
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- Kibroth - 02/09/2009
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Not bad at all.
Suggestions: A few words that I saw could be changed or rearranged, but primarily, I'd suggest the usage of spaces.
As your poem seems to have a distinct rythm, the use of the convention would only serve to enhance that aspect.
Regards,
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