ROB(Result of Boredom)

• Artist: kd821995
• Description: I was bored and decided to write what I felt about our now~dead~relationship
  These are the 4 main stanzas in the poem
  There are originally 13 in it
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: robresult boredom

After the long silence,
Being cold and dense
I finally said “Yes”
Just to stop this mess

This wouldn’t be happening now,
If only I had said “No” somehow
Yet I can’t break something special&splendid
Because it might not be mended

I should have regretted
Yet it can’t be denied
Since I love him so much
Should there be such?

Such joy and happiness
That may never lessen
Yet the pain and sadness
Just becomes a burden

Comments

[kd821995]

tnx for the advice,i'll keep that in mind

[carosene]

Um, nice little poem, though the rhyming seems kind of forced, and it's a little hard to follow, (Like, I don't understand what you're actually stopping) but it's good, keep working on these 3nodding