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Zhou Yu has risen his spear screaming in his melody scream.
Don't be afraid, death is not something that you have to fear, I along
don't fear a thing, as he taunts the generals king.
The loud and incessant roar, has given the men their power of will.
Lu Bu rushes through carrying along The Great and Mighty Dragon Spear.
He dashes through, like the flying wind. Gliding side to side, as he demolish's
anything that comes in front of him to stand their ground.
The enemy has an army of 10,000 men, this is insane as one of the generals whispers to himself ,Lu Bu says we don't have a chance, Zhou Yu says, i will supplant the enemy's base.
I'll kill them all, ill burn them all, nobody will stand in my way as long as i
get my family wish, which is a death wish. Lu Bu says, forget your pitty revenge we're all going to die, if we dont run away. RUN AWAY? WHAT? Dont tell me your scared? Your so superfluous when it comes to taking somebody's death, but now your backing away from a fight that has no meaning of life nor death.
Now its time as Zhou Yu says, he rushes through the grass like blood in his veins, he draws his spear as he leeps over the enemy foot calvary. He swings his spear, the blood glushes out like a boulder was just thrown into a river and made a big splash. He see's the king, grabs his spear, he continues to mock the enemy's feelings, he says to himself, you own me a liability for what you have done. He throws his spear in a perfect straight flow, everything stops like it was a dream and you were just woken up. The archers shoot their arrows out, as the spear goes through the kings chest, Zhou Yu says yes i have fulfilled my destiny, and now its my time to go to bed. He flys of the horse as the arrows pierce through him. He says goodbye my fellow men, you all did good as i expected from good people.
- Title: Revenge will find death
- Artist: maksim94
- Description: Just a little piece that i wrote while i was on the bus driving on my way to school. Its a very exciting piece of work. Please leave a comment if you want to, if you want please tell me what i should fix and how it could be better. Thank you =D.
- Date: 01/27/2009
- Tags: came hell fight sadness feelings
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Comments (1 Comments)
- bayjk1 - 01/29/2009
- Wow this is creative, and i like it, please continue to write this kind of stuff because im very interested.
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