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Brushed aside
Blown away
Forgotten like a rainy day
You said you loved me
You told me you cared
So when you broke my heart
It was too much to bare
You used me
And fooled me
What didn't you do?
So when you left me
I b***h-slapped you
- by Gerard_Ray_Frank |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Used
- Artist: Gerard_Ray_Frank
- Description: This poem doesn't seem like a joke until the last line...
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: used
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 08/26/2010
- Wow, I don't even remember writing this! But thank you, Drox!
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- DDrox316 - 08/23/2010
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hahah nice ending..
well i like the ending because it's like oh ha funny but i also don't like it because I wish it told about the girl getting closure.
i like the flow/rhyming in the beginning - Report As Spam
- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 04/25/2009
- Thanks for the comments!!! biggrin
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 04/25/2009
- Thanks for the comments guys!!!! Keep 'em coming! biggrin
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- PRINCE_GEPEE - 04/24/2009
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ummm i dont realy like it
nice try....3/5 - Report As Spam
- Wilted Bloody Rose - 04/03/2009
- hahaha
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- OoXSaraMonsterXoO - 03/09/2009
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ahahahahaaaa.... xDDD i love it! favorited. :]
5/5 for you... =D - Report As Spam
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