My Heart

• Artist: ILoveYourSmile-65
• Description: something i just came up with
• Date: 01/17/2009
• Tags: heart

you broke my heart once or twice...
but i wont make you pay the price...
what's done is done you can't replace...
my heart, thats been that way before...
but what you did is come along...
and you ripped it more and more...
so find a way to fix it up...
or leave me here to suffer...
for i can't deal with it by myself...
cause it's a lot more tougher....

Comments

[Onion Princess]

so pretty

[Lady Alice Road Kamelot]

A sweet poem, but I agree with the peson below. Watch your punctuation, and remember what's suppoesed to be capitalized or what needs to be lowercase. Keep writing, you're really good at it! Just remember that everyone is working to make themselves better.

[xJeriROCKSx]

lyk the poem, but try to use commas instead of periods. then after heart, you use the periods