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Another day,
Another dream,
Another stay,
At the same old stream.
Things will never change
In this stream of
Unhappiness.
Though I’ll always wish
To be near to you,
Some wishes weren’t
Meant to be true.
Just know that I,
Wherever I may be,
Will think of you
And wish your girl was me.
- by Briaz the Retrophiliac |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/16/2009 |
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- Title: Wishes
- Artist: Briaz the Retrophiliac
- Description: The best title I could really think of. Sorry peoples... Please comment. Honestly, I just threw it together in a couple of minutes, but I like it. I know the rhythm is off.
- Date: 01/16/2009
- Tags: wishes
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Briaz the Retrophiliac - 01/18/2009
- lol kool! xd This makes me very happy! Thank you, guys!!!
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- Kuro Fukai - 01/18/2009
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Out of the ones I've seen today, this one is better then most.
It's a typical theme, but, I see no grammatical errors or anything of that nature.
I like this :]
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- The Grace Of Rain - 01/17/2009
- Its really good
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