A poem i got from a question..

• Artist: 64PackOfCrayons
• Description: I was asked the question "would you die in the place of the one you loved" and i put "yes" then i wrote this poem that is related to the question....
• Date: 01/10/2009
• Tags: poem from question

I would die in the place of my loved one just so he can live his life,
Sadly i won't be in his life anymore.
I wish i can die and come back to life for him and take his pain
away with my smiles and laughs,
But sadly i cannot change it no matter how hard i try.
I wish i could fix it but i'm not god.
I would beg god a large amount of times but all he would say is "no"
I shall die in my loved one's place and say these simple words to him
I love you...

Comments

[Xialliest]

Ehh not very original. Sorry. And ending it with I love you is not original either. Even though I have done that with one of my poems. But to be honest, with this poem, I don't think it was good to end it with "I love you" 2/5