Memory and Reality

• Artist: Master Of Slytherin
• Description: Well i tryed to right a song wit this for a band but evreyone told me it sucked.
  ALL I CAME UP WITH PLEASE I WANNA NO WHAT PEOPLE THINK JUST EXPEIEMENTING. POEM
• Date: 01/04/2009
• Tags: memory reality

Tired so tired
of dreaming the same memory again

Tired so tired
of waking up to oblivion

Dont wanna go back dont wanna backtrack through reality
im waking up in invisibility

Dont wanna go back to reality
Dont wanna wake up from my memorys
But memory is telling me
About the things i cannot hear or see

Tired so tired
Feel just like im in a black hole

Tired so tired
I think reality is taking its toll

Comments

[Muste01]

neato and thx 4 th nice comment on my christmas avi 9its th 1st but hey i couldnt figure out wich 2 put it in my writing is definitly better than my avi entries)

[Holy lilly]

its good i like it keep at it

[Zayfell]

If put to some music and some of the things drawn out, the flow could work well razz anywho, I like it, just sounds sad! *huggles you*
~Your Queen

[Dhevix]

It's not bad. I quite like it, though I feel that it needs to flow better.