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I slide on an ailing,
Cracking pond.
It slips toward the king’s
Crown, menacing
Lies spurting from its mouth,
Elevating my skating.
!
While the world
Hastens away from heat,
Invisible walls
Throw themselves upwards,
Ever-glistening.
,
All the while, you, my
Queen, continue your
Unmoving façade,
Another step away from death.
,
Glamorous teardrops
Lower upon the
Iridescent ice,
Shining but horrified.
This freezing field
Eternalizes the flowers,
Never looking back.
It is a ring of
Now or never, forever.
Glassed over.
.
Slow and silent, there
Lie one thousand
Immeasurable glaciers. Now
Very wet, crying in an
Eradicating release.
Rise from the glazed
Sea, above a crawl.
Orifices melting,
Foragers freezing.
I now question you,
Clever queen, dancing the
Eminence of ice.
Misty and further away,
Escaping view, but
Laughing like so,
Tarnished, hoping to stay forgotten.
.
Surrender to the swansong,
Heed all facets that
I’m becoming.
Venice. Santiago. Moscow.
End in vain.
Rivers, you flowing beings!
Shy away from me,
As you – if not quite
Nervous – will dawn upon
Despair, and her cold waltz.
Chilling. That is I.
Run, my queen,
I’m more than
Expected, more than awaited.
So go before my touch comes.
Always it slides from your
Rancid mind, what I might
Erase someday.
Fear me now, I’m the
External path to
Loss, and mourning. I’m
The frozen touch of Winter.
- Title: Winter's Call
- Artist: Atheshya
- Description: I think this is my best poem.
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: winters call
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Comments (3 Comments)
- challen08 - 05/09/2009
- nice poem hhehe like it!! would you mind reading some of mine? i would really appreciate it. anyways like your choice of words.. all in all very nice
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- yellowasiann - 01/24/2009
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-cries.
its so touching.
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- The Judged Book - 01/02/2009
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This is a good poem. It flows together real nice and I love the context and words you used to describe everything.
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