-
I am the girl you see walk by
Long straight hair around my face
Did that time fly?
I didn't even notice you this time
i miss you every second of every day
but now we have nothing to say
but i miss you still
I let the friendship go to ruins
should i kill myself?
would you even care?
would you sense me in the air?
Missing you
as i sit here breathing my last breath
ur hate is drowning me
i cant wait for death
i lay here smiling my last fake smile
and all you can do is laugh
i fall in the security of a corner
grasping the razor tight
this is the end
the end of my life
- by XxNot Your_Average GirlxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/28/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: Death [my suicide]
- Artist: XxNot Your_Average GirlxX
- Description: Read please and rate
- Date: 12/28/2008
- Tags: death suicide
- Report Post
Comments (7 Comments)
- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 01/03/2009
-
omg thank you guys soo much i appreciate it! =]
- Report As Spam
- xX_iCookieMonster - 01/03/2009
- ahh this was depressing. but i love it... i know exactly how you feel. every EVERY well written.
- Report As Spam
- Cherry_Snuffles 6661 - 01/03/2009
- I thought it was really good...very much emotion...very powerful...very dark
- Report As Spam
- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 01/01/2009
-
thank you RenaChanXD
i appreciate it
- Report As Spam
- RenaChanXD - 12/31/2008
-
Jesus, harsh much, Leif?
I thought it was pretty good, and seeing as I write all the time and have felt the same at moments in my life, this gives me a one-up on your heartless comment. - Report As Spam
- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 12/31/2008
-
sorry =[
i combined to of my shorter poems. - Report As Spam
- RedLeif - 12/30/2008
-
lame
You should probably just kill yourself.... actually don't, I would feel bad... ooo.... hmm.... - Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
