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You scream
I cry
You leave
I die
Inside I'm nothing, nothing but weak
Your words of comfort is what i seek
I say i love you
And you say that's lame
It's like you don't....
feel the same
I'm scared, I'm lonely
It's you i need,
I'll shed my blood,
For you I'll bleed
My life's a misery, It's a shame
But i guess you think it's just a game
Well the fact of the matter is I do love you
and deep deep down i know you love me too.
- by kiwijian_01 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Hope You Know
- Artist: kiwijian_01
- Description: plz tell me wat you fink...
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- White Lights Reprisal - 12/29/2009
- wow, that's deep.
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- kadodge14 - 07/08/2009
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very well written
i would love to see u write a poem thats based strictly on metaphores though
no rhyming - Report As Spam
- MzMaryCharlii77 - 07/07/2009
- sOo hu is dah freak daht made yew feel diss way?? haha... dey betah runn!!! haha
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- 3mO_kIwI_dEaTh_AnGeL_03 - 07/06/2009
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ok so u feel wat i feel
gud gud - Report As Spam
- porsha_27 - 01/05/2009
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hey vanz i say the same
4 .......
lol dats reli gud lyk u've had expirence - Report As Spam
- New_Account_Pwease_Add - 12/23/2008
- CIKE das sum deep stuff happenin there....nice
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- kiwijian_01 - 12/23/2008
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thnx
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