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Weep not young lover
For the songbird sings
To you a requiem
Of disintegrated fondness
The disjointed chirping
Once the melody of
Young hearts will
Sound silvery when
The eyes of adoration
Are cast your way again
Young lover be not troubled
By the waning of affections
For the glory of spring
In all her fragrant joy
Buds but in your heart alone
And shines solely on the path
You now walk...
- Title: Weep Not Young Lover
- Artist: vardo5
- Description: Here is some sappy s**t i wrote after i broke up with a girl....Jeeze was i really this cheesmo??
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: weep young lover vardo5
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Comments (5 Comments)
- NoirGenesis00 - 07/09/2009
- I don't think it's cheesy, I like it.
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- Roxy - Ray - 03/28/2009
- Wow vardo that is great! did u break up with wendy?
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- darkangel9194 - 02/03/2009
- It's really good. I love the free verse ones! I haven't read one like this in a while.
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 12/18/2008
- Very nice free-verse.^ ^
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- tksunshine93 - 12/18/2008
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Sappy, maybe....Good? Yes
Good job. I like the free verse - Report As Spam