sarrow

• Artist: misty_bran
• Description: this is a powne i worte for any one feeling down some of it might not make sence until u look at it .enjoy and plz no bad cussword or bad note =3
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: sarrow

this is a powem that i wrote that is sad.

i call it sarrow.


~ the pain may pause but it never gos away~

~all the broken hearted people~

~we must be punished for the sins of others~

~so why dont you love me?~

~yin and yang both treated like monsters~

~i was always sad and cold all alone~

~broken inside~

~miss understood~

~drowning in my own tears~

~wanting to change myslef but never seamed to~

~why do i cry when i feel so hollow inside?~

~from what ive learned there are no happy endings.~



by: misty

Comments

[deactivated-28347834753]

This needs a lot of work. The only bright spot I can see it the imagery in 'yin and yang both treated like monsters', and that is NOT NEARLY enough to redeem this. Work on spelling and getting rid of clichés.

[misty_bran]

plz coment but plz make it clean