some one ilove but cant have..

• Artist: II SexFreak II
• Description:
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: person cant have

I love some one who dosent even now how much they mean to me i Love some one who i see each day and shes always smling I LOve some one who icant stop thinking Ilove some one who is impossible to get Ilove someone who is always their to cheer me up I love some one that I want every time when shes with another guy it breaks me but im try to be happy as long as shes happy i hate to see her sad i feel lik shait when she is i wish that person was mine but unfountenly ict have her seems to be any thing that i try to fails i just want a chance to show her how much she means to me i just wish that she could feel the same an i would never want to let her go

Comments

[Nycholas Flamel]

I get the gist of your work and I really like that, but I just can't get past the mistakes. 3/5.

[Toxxic D r e a m s]

A few typos but its pretty good
Altho It would have been easier to read if you would seperate the sentences from eachother
4/5

[venomous_bride]

='/

[o Taichi o]

awww. o: