- I love some one who dosent even now how much they mean to me i Love some one who i see each day and shes always smling I LOve some one who icant stop thinking Ilove some one who is impossible to get Ilove someone who is always their to cheer me up I love some one that I want every time when shes with another guy it breaks me but im try to be happy as long as shes happy i hate to see her sad i feel lik shait when she is i wish that person was mine but unfountenly ict have her seems to be any thing that i try to fails i just want a chance to show her how much she means to me i just wish that she could feel the same an i would never want to let her go
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- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: some one ilove but cant have..
- Artist: II SexFreak II
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- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: person cant have
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- Nycholas Flamel - 08/04/2009
- I get the gist of your work and I really like that, but I just can't get past the mistakes. 3/5.
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- Toxxic D r e a m s - 12/17/2008
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A few typos but its pretty good
Altho It would have been easier to read if you would seperate the sentences from eachother
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- venomous_bride - 12/15/2008
- ='/
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- o Taichi o - 12/13/2008
- awww. o:
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