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This is the last time
I'll write about you whenever you come to mind
these are the last words
from me
listen carefully and keenly
I loved you, I needed you
You were everything
that the heavens brought
I was everything that you thought
through the changing seasons
you were always my reason
to go on and breathe
instead of bleeding and to leave
I've been given too many chances
never again would I ask this
For a ripped soul tortured heart and a shadow of my own
memories burning inside me
my mind has been reminded
of my death
which was the last breath of it
Now that is nothing
My heart is still intact
My body is disabled and hacked
I was ready to commit
sacrificed any little thing
You ready to commit?
sacrificed nothing to keep us on top
Everything little thing you thought
was right, was wrong
Now you seek me
to destroy me
to break me apart
And bring your puppet to play in the dirt
I'll wipe away that smirk
leave him in your hands
leave you with a burden that is so grand
to show you not to ******** with me
not to play me
Run words that are ******** meaningless
your ******** mind can't make sense
can't deal with the truth
Now you see that i always knew
I was played all this time through
Now I've exposed you
Time to face the truth
Stop playing the game
There will be no winner, but
one will fall
and be destroyed by all
- Title: The Game
- Artist: cuete23
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Description:
based on somthin personal that happened to me and u'll see what i mean
-------------comment let me know what you think----------- - Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: game
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Comments (3 Comments)
- cuete23 - 12/12/2008
- if you guys liked this 1 check out my other ritings
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- Lady_Lycanthrope1990 - 12/11/2008
- I really enjoyed how you wrote this out to express your feelings, it is a very deep piece of art. i give it a 5/5 smile
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- OhhShitniz - 12/11/2008
- It would be a good story...so-so as a poem, but then again I'm not the one to complain. You do a much better job than me haha~ smile It brings out a lot of emotion though...You have a powerful style of writing, getting a strong feeling across to your readers. I'll give it a 5/5 for effort smile
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