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Love
Is something everybody has no matter what age you are,
Something hurtful and something enjoyabul.
Don't hate it you don't even need to like it,
Just enjoy it.
Though when you brake up its tough but no worry's it will get better soon,
But the meaning of love for me,
Is to enjoy it as much as I can
- by M-Liliac-M |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: M-Liliac-M
- Description: It's what I have been through tough times and nice ones
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dragon_Fears - 12/11/2008
- SWEET.. I like it, the way u put it and all is kool so yea ill enjoy it thyen
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- Adderall Sleep - 12/10/2008
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Whoa.
Editing is something you may need. Now.
Structure isn't the best.
Diction...doesn't even exist here.
Word choice? Not great.
Even the spelling is semi-tragic.
It's nice.
But not poetic material. - Report As Spam
- kikki_nikki - 12/10/2008
- wow i like it smile
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