Betrayal

• Artist: Dragon_of_Eternal_light
• Description: Another poem for class but done way better then my last one. It's a sad poem about being betrayed.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: betrayal

Can you hear my screams,
As I die in these dreams.
The frozen lake above my head,
Leads my to deaths bed,

The ropes of fire sreech in protest,
Of the blood craving blade in my breast,
Your ice heart,
Died quick like a dart,

You put me here,
I loved you dear,
You killed me here,
Did you not hold me dear?

The howling of the wind,
Announces you have sinned,
The ever pounding rain,
Does numb my pain,

You loved me,
You killed me,
Saved me,
And hurt me,

So why do you choose to betray,
Will you not just walk away,
I loved you with a firey passion,
Now I die for your compassion.

Comments

[I Am Not A Ginger]

that's really good! depressing, but its obvious that u wrote it from ur heart. a tip: try to work a little more on the wording. the first and last two stanzas are the best. but good job overall.