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As the days go by
each of us
slowly gives away
little pieces of who we are....
we give ourselves
to famliy
to friends
to people we don't even know....
but always inside....
we keep a special little piece
until one day,
in one given moment,
we know to whom it belongs
and in giving away this piece of ourselves
we are now
complete...
- by MakoxXxOkumura |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Complete
- Artist: MakoxXxOkumura
- Description: just random.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: complete
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 03/20/2009
- There are other ways to show pause other than making another line but I do like this poem when read as if in prose. 3/5. ^^
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- 290DarkStars - 02/17/2009
- sounds a bit confusing, but then again im confused easaly sweatdrop . ah well, i still love it, because of how true it really is. 5/5 my friend.
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- Chahklat - 02/14/2009
- This may be random, but I love it!
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- RanDOm_ChicK01111 - 12/07/2008
- Wow i really like this. Good work. 5/5
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